Revised Essay 2-02b: Youme Town Hikarinomori is great

     I introduce my favorite place. It is "Youme Town Hikarinomori" and this is a name of a shopping mall stands in Kikuyo village, Kumamoto. It's convenient because the shopping mall is close from JR's Hikarinomori station and it takes about 3 minutes to get there on foot. Now I'll describe some details on the facilities of the mall.
     The mall, "Youme Town Hikarinomori" consists of 2 buildings, main building and southern building. Basically, groceries, commodities, shoes, clothes and stuff you need in daily life are sold in the main building. Also, there's a food court in the building. Whereas, sports equipment, perfumes, glasses are sold in the southern building. Moreover, there're a game arcade and theater in the building.
     The main building is useful because there are many kinds of shops. On the 1st floor, there're a large food section, shoes section, kitchen equipment section and stationary section and others.
Also, there's a walkway standing various restaurants side-by-side on the floor. On the 2nd floor, there's a good food court, McDonald's, Subway, Doutor, 31 Ice Cream and others in it. Also, many clothes shops, a large book store, a musical instrument shop, a small game arcade, a brand shop, bag and wallet section on the floor. The upper floors in the main building are for parking.
     The southern building is good to have fun because there're a large game arcade, a theater, a sports equipment store, toy section, a shoes shop, a clothes shop, a perfume shop and a cafe in the building. The 1st floor in the building is just entrance, and these shops listed above are on the 2nd floor, and the game arcade, "Namco Land" and the theater, "TOHO cinemas" are on the 3rd floor.
     "Youme Town Hikarinomori" is convenient and it's based on the information listed above. It's good to browse, good to buy and good to eat in the mall. You must have fun!

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